Hi Nikthe thick to thin contrast is a bit too strong-thin lines could be slightly thickeralso wrap the details around the forms like the treads on the soles of the shoesand don't make up new shapes that aren't in the original pencil drawinglike the wobbly shirt sleevesput a little weight under formsunder chincrotchnoseone more :avoid putting details in the MIDDLE of formslike the lines inside the earthey should be closer to the top
Hi Nik
ReplyDeletethe thick to thin contrast is a bit too strong-thin lines could be slightly thicker
also wrap the details around the forms
like the treads on the soles of the shoes
and don't make up new shapes that aren't in the original pencil drawing
like the wobbly shirt sleeves
put a little weight under forms
under chin
crotch
nose
one more :avoid putting details in the MIDDLE of forms
like the lines inside the ear
they should be closer to the top